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I made a thread a while ago about two ideas that I had for a film idea for college. I've changed it slightly to what my orginal idea was, as I couldn't think of a way to develop the characters.
Below is my script so far, because its rather long I've added it as an attachment.
The person named 'Rory' didn't mean to kill his girlfriend, however I want to get the point across that he doesn't know what to do next. I also need to add in there somewhere about him having a criminal record (For a non violent crime, thats important), which is one of the reasons why he doesn't know what to do, as he doesn't think the police will believe him when he says what happens.
I was thinking about adding it when they are having dinner, but not 100% sure if it would work.
Does anyone have any ideas? The script isn't finished yet (About 50% of the first draft done so far). But the middle part (Rory and women having dinner) is important.
I also need a name for 'Women', if anyone can think of anything.
Thanks
Below is my script so far, because its rather long I've added it as an attachment.
The person named 'Rory' didn't mean to kill his girlfriend, however I want to get the point across that he doesn't know what to do next. I also need to add in there somewhere about him having a criminal record (For a non violent crime, thats important), which is one of the reasons why he doesn't know what to do, as he doesn't think the police will believe him when he says what happens.
I was thinking about adding it when they are having dinner, but not 100% sure if it would work.
Does anyone have any ideas? The script isn't finished yet (About 50% of the first draft done so far). But the middle part (Rory and women having dinner) is important.
I also need a name for 'Women', if anyone can think of anything.
Thanks