Not quite a camera question but i thought you lot would understand composition.

I'm re-doing some boards to show of a light i designed for uni but can't make my mind up on the how to lay them out. I need 2 A2 boards withminimal wording and they should be able to tell the 'whole story' of the product. I have attached some very rough (and badly photoshopped boards) to a, show the product to inspire and b, to show you were im at.

I had an idea of having a white faded brick background with the main image on the left, one off one on and 3 paint stripes of centre to the right at different lengths. To the right of those i thought about 3 boxes like:
1
2
3


either 2 with pics (1 and 3) and the other writing or the other way around.

Im thinking too much and my head hurts

heres the boards

The sofa is way too dominant....Your light is lost in the composition....Also the layout of the three stacked boxes is a bit basic....

Take a look at how companies like Apple & Sony show off their products for some inspiration....

basic but you can see the effect some framing has (also "bursting out" of frame...)